Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cümlenizi dilbilgisi açısından düzeltmeniz ve daha doğal bir yapı kullanmanız gerekiyor. Kısa ve net bir giriş cümlesi kurun (ör. 'Yes, I did'). Eğer gerekliyse bir veya iki ek cümleyle kısa bir ayrıntı verin: bisikleti kimden aldığınız, ne zaman kullandığınız veya neden sevdiğiniz gibi. Ayrıca tekrar eden kelimelerden kaçının ve maksimum 3-4 cümleyle cevaplayın.

例: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle that I received for my seventh birthday, and I rode it every day after school. It helped me become more independent and made playing with my friends easier.

提案: İfade ve kelime sıralaması ile telaffuz ve dilbilgisi sorunları var. Net bir görüş cümlesiyle başlayın (ör. 'Yes, I think bikes are quite popular'). Ardından bir bağlaç kullanarak nedeni açıklayın (because/ since/ mainly because) ve spesifik örnekler verin (ör. artan çevre bilinci, toplu taşıma kısıtlamaları COVID-19 döneminde). Tarih ve terimlerde doğru ifadeyi kullanın (COVID-19). Cevabınızı 2-3 cümlede tutun.

例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular now, especially in cities. This is mainly because people became more health-conscious and avoided crowded public transport during the COVID-19 pandemic, so many started cycling for short trips.

× Yes, I have a bike when I I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student used the present tense 'have' while referring to a past time ('when I was a child'), so past tense 'had' is required. Also there is a duplicated 'I'. Suggestion: use past simple for finished past situations (I had), and remove duplicate words (only one 'I').

× Uh, mostly yes. They're bike more popular when the after the cop 19.

✓ Uh, mostly yes. Bikes became more popular after COVID-19.

Multiple issues: 'They're bike' mixes contraction 'they're' (they are) with singular noun 'bike' — use plural 'bikes' and correct verb tense. The event refers to a change in the past, so past simple 'became' is appropriate. 'the after the cop 19' is ungrammatical; use 'after COVID-19' without article. Suggestion: say 'Bikes became more popular after COVID-19.'