Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Correct grammar and tense, give a direct topic sentence, and add one specific supporting detail. Use past tense for childhood and avoid contradictions. Keep it natural and concise (max 5 sentences).

例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn't afford one, so I usually walked to school instead. Because of that, I became used to long walks and learned more about my neighborhood.

提案: Make the response more natural and specific. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two supporting reasons or examples using linking words (e.g., "because", "for example"). Avoid awkward phrasing like "which have popularity."

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and to avoid traffic. For example, in cities you can see bike lanes and bike-sharing schemes that many commuters use every day.

× No, I have.

✓ No, I didn't.

The examiner asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student must use past tense. 'I have' is present tense and ungrammatical here. Use past simple negative 'I didn't (have one)' or full form 'No, I didn't have a bike.' Suggestion: say 'No, I didn't have one' or 'No, I didn't have a bike.'

× I don't have a bike when I was child.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present simple negative ('I don't have') with a past time clause ('when I was a child'). Use past simple for both: 'I didn't have.' Also missing the article before 'child' — add 'a child.' Suggestion: 'I didn't have a bike when I was a child.'

× Yes, of course, there are so many bikes which have popularity.

✓ Yes, of course, there are many popular bikes.

The phrase 'have popularity' is awkward and unidiomatic. Use the adjective 'popular' to describe bikes. Also 'so many' can be reduced to 'many' for natural speech. The relative clause 'which have popularity' is unnecessary. Suggestion: 'Yes, of course, there are many popular bikes.'