Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a fuller response: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two brief supporting details (reason or memory). Use linking words if adding details and keep within 3–4 sentences. Also avoid one-word answers to show fluency and vocabulary.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought it was safer for me to learn to walk and take public transport first, so I only rode a bike for the first time at age twelve. As a result, I didn’t use a bike regularly until my teens.

提案: Provide a direct opinion then support it with specific reasons or examples and a linking word. Mention where and why they are popular (e.g., commuting, exercise, cost) to show vocabulary and coherence. Keep it concise (2–3 sentences).

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, in cities you often see dedicated bike lanes and students riding to school, which makes cycling a convenient and affordable option.

× No.

✓ No.

The one-word response 'No.' is grammatically correct and appropriate for the question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?'. It correctly uses the past tense context by negating possession; no changes are needed.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The sentence is grammatically correct: 'I think' uses present tense appropriately to express a current opinion, and 'bikes are popular' correctly uses the present simple. No corrections are required.