Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời quá ngắn và thiếu chi tiết. Nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó cung cấp thêm 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ (ví dụ: kiểu xe, ai tặng, bạn thường đi đâu, cảm xúc). Sử dụng liên từ để nối ý. Giữ không quá 5 câu và dùng từ vựng cụ thể hơn.

例: Yes, I did — I had a small red bicycle when I was about seven. My parents gave it to me as a birthday present, and I used to ride it to the park near our house every afternoon. It made me feel very independent and happy.

提案: Câu trả lời có ý nhưng ngữ pháp và diễn đạt chưa chính xác, thiếu chi tiết cụ thể. Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề sửa lỗi ngữ pháp, sau đó nêu lý do và đưa ví dụ hoặc so sánh quá khứ - hiện tại. Dùng liên từ (for example, however, now) để nối ý. Giữ tối đa 5 câu.

例: Yes, I think bicycles have been popular in my country both in the past and today. In the past, many people used bikes as their main way of getting around, especially in rural areas. Nowadays, cycling is also common in cities because it is cheap, healthy and convenient for short trips.

× I think bike are popular in my country in the past and now.

✓ I think bikes were popular in my country in the past and are popular now.

The original sentence has two problems: a singular/plural mismatch and inconsistent tense. 'bike are' is incorrect because the noun should be plural to match the plural verb form, so use 'bikes are'. However, the sentence refers to both past and present, so use the past tense for the past period and present tense for now: 'were popular in my country in the past and are popular now'. Suggestion: make the noun plural when using a plural verb and match verb tenses to the time references ('were' for past, 'are' for present).