Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is not relevant to the question and contains incorrect grammar. For Part 1 you should respond directly with a clear topic sentence (yes/no or brief statement), then add one or two specific supporting details using simple linking words. Keep answers natural, coherent and up to five sentences. Practise using past tense and simple vocabulary related to childhood and bikes.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bicycle that my parents bought me when I was seven, and I used to ride it to a nearby park every weekend. Because it had training wheels at first, I felt safe learning to ride, and I remember being very proud when I could ride without them.

提案: Your answer attempts to respond but has grammar errors and lacks specific supporting detail. Use a clear topic sentence (Yes/No), then add reasons or examples with linking words (because, for example, however). Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and countable/uncountable nouns: 'bicycles are popular' or 'cycling is popular'.

例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short journeys and exercise. For example, city centres have bike lanes and there are bike-sharing programmes, which makes cycling convenient for students and office workers.

× When are you like John? I am not my wife.

✓ Who are you talking about? I am not his wife.

The original sentence uses the wrong interrogative structure and pronouns. 'When are you like John?' is ungrammatical and likely intended to ask 'Who are you like, John?' or 'Are you like John?'. Also 'I am not my wife' incorrectly uses 'my' and creates a contradiction; the student likely meant 'I am not his wife.' Suggest to ask a clear question: use 'who' or 'are you like' correctly, and use the correct possessive pronoun that matches the referenced person (his/her/their). Ensure subject and possessive pronoun agree with the person referred to.

× Yes, my country are popular in bike.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country.

The original sentence has several errors: subject-verb agreement ('my country are' should be 'my country is' if country is subject) and incorrect word order and preposition use ('popular in bike' is ungrammatical). The intended meaning is that bicycles are popular, so make 'bikes' the subject and use 'are popular in my country' or better 'popular in my country' with plural subject: 'Bikes are popular in my country.' This fixes agreement and preposition placement.