Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response simply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. For a better score, answer directly with a clear topic sentence, add one or two specific supporting details using linking words, keep it natural and concise (no more than 4–5 sentences), and use appropriate vocabulary.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that I learned to ride when I was six, and I used it to go to my friend’s house every weekend. Because my neighborhood was quiet and safe, I practised cycling often and became quite confident by the time I was eight.

提案: Your answer attempts to respond but is unclear, contains grammar errors and hesitations, and lacks specific supporting details. Improve by starting with a clear opinion, use correct grammar (e.g., "a growing trend"), include one or two specific reasons or examples linked with connectors (because, for example), and keep it concise and natural.

例: Yes, bikes are becoming more popular in my country. For example, many people now cycle for exercise and short commutes because cities are encouraging cycling with new bike lanes, and this helps avoid traffic and stay healthy.

× Well, there is a raise trending of people riding everywhere like practicing more rather than using the bike and the traffic. Umm, traffic tools. So yes.

✓ Well, there is a rising trend of people riding bikes more for practice and recreation rather than using them for traffic or commuting. So yes.

Errors: The original uses incorrect nouns and awkward phrasing ('raise trending', 'riding everywhere like practicing', 'traffic tools'), which are not covered exactly by a single listed item but fall under sentence structure and word choice issues (use item 26: Sentence structure errors and item 11: Incorrect use of prepositions/words). Correction: 'rising trend' is the correct collocation, 'riding bikes' clarifies the action, and 'for practice and recreation rather than using them for traffic or commuting' expresses the intended contrast clearly. Suggestion: Use common collocations (rising trend), place modifiers next to the words they modify, and choose precise nouns ('commuting' or 'traffic' rather than 'traffic tools').