Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は概ね理解できるが、文法と語順、語彙の選択、明瞭さを改善する必要があります。具体的には過去の習慣を述べるときは過去形や「used to」を使い、主語と動詞の一致に注意してください。また、不要な語句を省き、文を簡潔にまとめると自然に聞こえます。例えば「Spike full commuting」は意味が不明なので具体的に説明するか削除しましょう。練習方法としては、過去の習慣を表す簡潔な主文＋1つか2つの具体的な支持文（いつ、どれくらい、どこへ）を作る練習をしてください。

例: Yes, I did. I used to commute to school by bicycle when I was in junior high. I often rode long distances—about 5 kilometers each way—so I became quite confident cycling on busy streets.

提案: 内容は伝わるが、文法、数の一致、語順、論理的なつなぎが不十分です。複数形や冠詞（e.g. "students", "the"）を正しく使い、「しかし（but）」で始める文は完結させてください。理由を挙げる場合は2～3点に絞り、接続詞（for example, because, so）でつなぐと論理的です。練習としては、まず一文で結論を述べ、次に具体的な理由を一つか二つ示す練習を繰り返してください。

例: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in Japan. Many students and commuters use them because they are cheap and convenient. For example, people often cycle short distances to stations or shops instead of taking a car.

× I usually use Spike full commuting to school when I was in junior high school and I was familiar was riding bicycle for long distance.

✓ I usually used Spike to commute to school when I was in junior high, and I was familiar with riding a bicycle long distances.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses and has incorrect verb forms and missing prepositions. 'Usually use' should be past 'usually used' to match 'when I was in junior high'. 'Spike full' is unclear; assuming it is a bicycle name, 'used Spike to commute' is clearer. 'Commuting' should be the noun 'to commute' after 'used'. 'I was familiar was riding' has an extra 'was' and needs the preposition 'with': 'familiar with riding'. 'Bicycle' should have an article 'a' and 'long distance' should be pluralized to 'long distances' or 'long distances' to sound natural. Suggestion: maintain consistent past tense, include necessary prepositions and articles, and correct word order. Please check the proper name 'Spike' and adjust if wrong.

× Almost all student or people who are commuting working place use bicycle and Japan has extended transportation system.

✓ Almost all students or people who commute to work use bicycles, and Japan has an extensive transportation system.

'Student' should be plural 'students' to match 'almost all'. 'Who are commuting working place' is ungrammatical; use the verb 'who commute to work' or 'people who commute to their workplace'. 'Use bicycle' needs plural 'bicycles' (or 'use a bicycle' for individuals). 'Japan has extended transportation system' should be 'an extensive transportation system' to use the correct adjective and include the indefinite article 'an'. Suggestion: ensure subject and verb forms agree, pluralize count nouns when appropriate, and use correct adjectives and articles.

× But people use bicycle because of affordable price and.

✓ But people use bicycles because they are affordable.

The original sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. 'Use bicycle' needs plural 'bicycles' or 'a bicycle'. 'Because of affordable price and.' ends abruptly; rephrase to 'because they are affordable' or 'because of their affordable price'. Suggestion: complete the clause after 'because' and ensure pronouns or determiners refer clearly to the noun ('their').