Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Correct grammar and keep answers concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question (e.g., “No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.”). Avoid self-contradiction: you said both that you didn’t have a bike and that you did. If you mean you had one at some time, clarify the timeline. Use one or two linking words to add brief supporting detail (reason, frequency) and avoid repetition. Limit to about 2–4 sentences.

例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was very young. I got a small bicycle when I was about nine and then used it every day to visit friends and go to the park. However, I never learned to ride properly, so I still can't ride confidently now.

提案: Improve grammatical accuracy and vocabulary precision, and reduce hesitations. Begin with a clear topic sentence (e.g., “Yes, bikes are very popular in my country.”). Follow with 1–2 specific reasons using linking words (because/so/therefore) and give a short example or consequence. Replace fillers (uh, umm) with pauses or a well-chosen word. Use correct noun forms (e.g., “employers” or “commuters”).

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because our traffic management is poor and congestion is common. As a result, many commuters, especially office workers and delivery riders, use motorcycles and scooters to save time during peak hours.

× No, I didn't had a bike when I was a child and also to be honest right now I don't even know how to ride a bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child and to be honest right now I don't even know how to ride a bike.

Using 'did' (past auxiliary) requires the base form of the main verb, so 'had' is incorrect after 'didn't'. Use 'have'. Suggestion: use 'didn't have' for past negative statements and keep 'to be honest' placement natural: 'and, to be honest, right now...'.

× But I do have a bicycle when I was a child and I used to ride bicycle a lot, most of the time I used to ride it every day.

✓ But I did have a bicycle when I was a child, and I used to ride it a lot; most of the time I rode it every day.

This sentence mixes present 'do have' with past time reference 'when I was a child'. Use past tense 'did have'. Also 'ride bicycle' needs an article or pronoun: 'ride it' or 'ride a bicycle'. 'Used to' already indicates habitual past, so repeating 'used to' is redundant; use 'used to ride it a lot' or 'most of the time I rode it every day'.

× Yes, bikers really popular in your, in my country because, uh, we do not have a proper traffic management system and uh, traffic jam is a really common problem in our country.

✓ Yes, bikes are really popular in my country because we do not have a proper traffic management system and traffic jams are a very common problem there.

'Bikers really popular' lacks a verb and has agreement issues. Either use the subject 'bikes' with 'are' or 'bikers are'. Also 'traffic jam' as a general problem should be plural 'traffic jams'. Replace 'in your, in my country' with 'in my country' for clarity. Suggestion: 'Bikes are really popular in my country' or 'Bikers are really common'.

× So, uh, most people, especially employer, umm, heavily depend on bike, uh, for faster transportation.

✓ So most people, especially employees, heavily depend on bikes for faster transportation.

'Employer' is the wrong noun; likely intended 'employees' (people who work). Use plural 'employees'. 'Depend on bike' needs plural 'bikes' or 'a bike' depending on meaning; here plural fits general statement. Also 'depend on' takes the object 'bikes'. Suggestion: 'especially employees' and 'depend on bikes'.