Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Expand your answer with a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words (e.g., "because", "so", "and") to make it more coherent. Keep it natural and no more than 3–4 short sentences. Mention what kind of bike, how you used it, or a brief memory to add content.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought me when I was seven, and I used it to ride to my friend's house every weekend. Because it had training wheels at first, I learned to balance slowly and then rode without them within a month.

提案: Give a direct opinion first, then support it with specific reasons and a linking word. Avoid hesitations like "mmm" and form a complete sentence. Refer to trends (e.g., electric bikes, commuting, cost) to make your answer concrete and natural.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular, especially electric bikes. For example, many people use electric bicycles for short commutes because they are cheaper than cars and convenient in busy cities, so sales have increased recently.

× MMM, I think. Electricity bikes more popular?

✓ Hmm, I think electric bikes are more popular.

The sentence contains an adjective form error and a missing verb. 'Electricity bikes' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'electric' modifying 'bikes'. Additionally, the sentence is a question that requires the verb 'are' for present tense plurality: 'electric bikes are more popular.' Use 'Hmm' or 'Well' as a filler instead of 'MMM'. Overall suggestion: use the adjective 'electric' and include the copular verb 'are' to form a complete, grammatically correct sentence.'