Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn đã lặp lại câu hỏi của giám khảo thay vì trả lời. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp với một câu chủ đề, sau đó cung cấp 1–2 chi tiết bổ sung (dùng liên từ khi cần) và không quá 5 câu. Chú ý ngữ pháp (ví dụ: “when you were a child” chứ không phải “when you were child”).

例: Yes, I had a small red bicycle when I was a child. It was my favourite toy and I rode it to the park every weekend. Because it had training wheels, I learned to balance slowly and gained confidence.

提案: Bạn tiếp tục chỉ lặp lại câu hỏi thay vì trả lời. Hãy đưa ra ý kiến rõ ràng trong câu chủ đề và thêm lý do hoặc ví dụ cụ thể, sử dụng liên từ để nối ý. Chú ý số ít/ số nhiều và chia động từ đúng ("bikes are" không "bike are").

例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people use them for short trips because they are cheap and convenient, and local governments have been building more bike lanes to encourage cycling.

× Did you have a bike when you were child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

You omitted the definite article 'a' before 'child'. In English, when referring to someone being a child (countable noun) in this context, the correct phrase is 'a child'. Suggestion: include the article 'a' in the phrase 'a child' so the sentence reads 'when you were a child'.

× Do you think bike are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The noun 'bike' should be plural to agree with the plural verb form 'are' and the general question about bikes in the country. Use 'bikes' (plural) with 'are'. Suggestion: change 'bike' to 'bikes' so subject and verb agreement are correct: 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?'.