Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap daha doğal ve zaman uyumlu olmalı; geçmişten bahsederken simple past kullanın. Ayrıca bir konu cümlesi ekleyip kısa destekleyici bilgi verin. Örneğin hangi yaşta, ne tür bir bisiklet olduğunu veya bisikleti ne için kullandığınızı belirtin. Bağlaçlar kullanmaya gerek yok ama 2–3 kısa cümleyle genişletin.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was eight and it was a small red bicycle with training wheels. I used it every day to ride to my friend’s house and around the neighbourhood.

提案: Cümle yapısı ve dilbilgisi hataları var; olumsuzluk ve çoğul formlar yanlış kullanılmış. Ayrıca görüşünüzü destekleyecek kısa sebepler ekleyin ve bağlaçlarla akışı sağlayın (örneğin because, although). Daha doğal bir ifade için 'I don't think' veya 'People usually prefer' gibi kalıplar kullanın.

例: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because most people usually prefer to drive cars. Also, public bike lanes are limited, so cycling can feel unsafe in busy cities.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The examiner asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense. Use 'had' (simple past) to match the time frame. Suggestion: Pay attention to signal words indicating time (e.g., 'when you were') and change the verb to past tense accordingly.

× I think no peoples usually use car.

✓ I think most people usually use cars.

Several issues: 'peoples' is incorrect for 'people' (people is already plural), 'no' misrepresents the intended meaning, and 'car' should be plural when speaking generally. The best correction is 'most people usually use cars' to indicate that a large number of people use cars. Suggestion: Use 'people' not 'peoples', choose correct quantifiers ('most', 'many', 'few'), and pluralize nouns when speaking in general about groups (cars).