Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn đã chỉ lặp lại câu hỏi của giám khảo thay vì trả lời. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề ngắn, rồi cung cấp 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể sử dụng liên từ nếu cần. Ví dụ nêu thời gian, ai mua cho bạn, hoặc bạn thường đi đâu bằng xe đạp. Giữ độ dài không quá 5 câu và dùng từ vựng phù hợp với bối cảnh.

例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven, a small red bicycle my parents bought for my birthday. I often rode it around the neighborhood with my friends, usually in the evenings after school.

提案: Bạn tiếp tục lặp lại câu hỏi thay vì đưa ra ý kiến. Hãy mở đầu bằng một câu nêu quan điểm rõ ràng (yes/no/partly) rồi giải thích ngắn gọn với lý do cụ thể và ví dụ. Sử dụng liên từ như 'because' hoặc 'however' để kết nối ý, và giới hạn trả lời trong tối đa 5 câu.

例: Yes, I think bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially in smaller towns where traffic is light. For example, many students and workers use bicycles for short commutes because they are cheap and convenient. However, in big cities people often prefer motorbikes or cars due to longer distances and busy roads.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student's reply repeated the examiner's question rather than answering. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Provide a past-tense statement to answer the question: use 'had' (past of 'have') and keep time marker 'when I was a child'. A clear improvement: form a full declarative sentence starting with subject + past-tense verb: 'I had a bike when I was a child.' You can add 'Yes,' to show affirmation.

× Do you think bikes are popular in the country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The student used 'the country' which sounds unnatural here; the question asks about the listener's country, so use the possessive 'your' (ID 17: Incorrect use of the definite article / article choice). Replace 'the' with 'your' to correctly indicate the country belonging to the listener. Suggestion: use 'your country' when referring to the examinee's own country.