Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Votre réponse est trop courte et contient une erreur de temps. Donnez une phrase d’ouverture claire au passé et ajoutez une brève explication. Utilisez un temps cohérent (past simple) et évitez les répétitions.

例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn't afford one, so I usually walked to school or rode with friends when they offered.

提案: La réponse est confuse et contient beaucoup d’erreurs grammaticales et de pronoms incorrects. Répondez d’abord clairement, puis ajoutez 1–2 phrases de soutien avec des détails précis et des mots de liaison (for example, because, so). Évitez les répétitions et structurez la réponse de façon logique.

例: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country. For example, many children own bikes for short trips to school and shops, and in cities people often use them to avoid traffic and save money.

× No, I don't have it.

✓ No, I didn't have one.

The examiner asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student must use past tense. 'Don't have' is present tense and incorrect here. Also, 'it' is unclear; 'one' or 'a bike' is more natural. Suggestion: use simple past 'didn't have' and a clear noun: 'I didn't have a bike.'

× Yes is very popular in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country.

The student omitted the plural subject and auxiliary 'are' for present simple description. The correct structure requires subject 'bikes' and verb 'are'. Also include a comma after 'Yes'. Suggestion: say 'Yes, bikes are very popular in my country.'

× Every you every child was has one and is not basically for this the the Shire and the big big.

✓ Almost every child had one, and they were not only for the countryside but for the cities too.

The original sentence has multiple problems: wrong word order, mixed tenses ('was has'), incorrect pronouns and articles, and unclear vocabulary ('Shire', duplicate words). The context is past habit, so use past tense 'had'. Use 'almost every child' or 'every child' (singular/plural agreement) and a plural pronoun 'they' to refer to 'children'. Clarify contrast with 'not only ... but ...'. Suggestion: practice forming clear parallel structures and keep tense consistent: 'Almost every child had one, and they were not only for the countryside but for the cities too.'