Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is direct but too brief and repetitive. Add a topic sentence with one or two specific supporting details (e.g., what the bike looked like, how you used it, or a short memory) and use a linking word if giving extra information. Keep it natural and under five sentences.

例: Yes, I had a small red bicycle when I was a child. It had a bell and training wheels, and I used it to ride to my friends’ houses every afternoon. Because I practised a lot, I learned to ride without the training wheels by the age of seven.

提案: Your answer is clear but too general. Provide a reason or example to support your opinion and use a linking word to connect ideas. Mention where people commonly use bikes or which groups use them to make the response more specific.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, in cities you often see commuters cycling to work, and in rural areas children use bikes to get to school.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

This sentence is grammatically correct. The past simple tense 'had' correctly answers the question about possession in the past; pronouns and articles are used properly. No changes needed.

× Yes, I think that bikes are popular in my country.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

This sentence is grammatically correct. The present simple 'are' correctly expresses a general truth about bikes' popularity; the optional word 'that' can be omitted for a more natural response but is not incorrect. No changes needed.