Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 答えをより明確で流暢にする必要があります。まず冒頭で直接的に「持っていなかった」と簡潔に答え、その後で理由や補足を1〜2文で述べてください。不要なフィラー（uh, like）を減らし、動詞の時制や語順を正しく使ってください。具体的には、誰と練習したのか、どのくらいの頻度で乗ったのか、どのような状況で練習したのかを加えると内容が豊かになります。例文では明確な主語と過去形を用い、接続詞（but, so, because）で文をつなげてください。

例: I didn't have my own bike when I was a child, but I often practised riding my friend’s bike in the park. We practiced almost every weekend until I became confident, so I could ride without help by the time I was ten.

提案: 意見をはっきり述べ、続けて理由と具体例を一つか二つ示す形にしましょう。曖昧な表現（neither popular or not popular）を避け、どの層に人気があるかを明示してください。語彙はシンプルで適切な単語（shared bikes, ride, young people, convenient）を使い、接続語（because, for example, however）でつなげてください。さらに、shared bikesの具体的な使われ方や影響（通勤、短距離移動、環境面）を述べると説得力が増します。日本語の改善点としては、主張→理由→具体例の順で話す練習をしてください。

例: I think bikes are fairly popular, especially in cities. For example, shared bikes are everywhere and many young people use them for short trips because they can unlock a bike with a QR code. This is convenient for commuting and helps reduce traffic and pollution.

× Uh, actually I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but I, uh, exercise, biking, practice biking by somebody else, bike. So I think that's it.

✓ Uh, actually I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but I exercised by riding other people's bikes. So I think that's it.

The original sentence mixes present and past tenses and has unclear verb forms. Use past tense 'exercised' to match 'didn't have' and 'riding' as a gerund for the activity. Also rephrase 'somebody else, bike' to 'other people's bikes' for clarity. Improve by keeping tense consistent and using correct gerund forms: 'I exercised by riding other people's bikes.'

× On I think is it is neither popular or not popular or unpopular because yeah, there's like shared bike. There's a lot like shared bike in my city. And the young people always like scan the QR.

✓ I think bicycles are neither very popular nor very unpopular because there are shared bikes. There are a lot of shared bikes in my city, and young people always scan QR codes.

The original contains disfluent phrasing, incorrect connectors, article errors and awkward word order. Use 'neither... nor' for the correlative conjunction, plural 'bicycles' and 'shared bikes', and 'there are' for existence. Replace 'scan the QR' with 'scan QR codes' for natural English. Suggestions: use clear connectors, correct plural forms, and standard expressions: 'neither very popular nor very unpopular', 'there are a lot of shared bikes', 'scan QR codes.'