Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response did not answer the examiner’s question and contained repetition and a pronunciation/word-choice error (“bug” instead of “bike”). Focus on answering directly with a clear topic sentence. Keep it concise (max 5 sentences) and provide one or two specific supporting details using simple linking words (e.g., “Yes. When I was a child,...” or “No. I didn’t have one because...” ). Practice the correct word and pronunciation: “bike” /baɪk/ and avoid repeating phrases.

例: Yes. I had a small red bike when I was a child. It was my main way to get around the neighborhood, and I learned to ride it when I was six. Because I rode it every day, I became very confident and liked exploring nearby parks.

提案: Your reply misunderstood the question and changed the key word from “bikes” to “bags,” so it did not address the topic. Listen carefully to the examiner and restate or paraphrase the question if needed before answering. Begin with a clear opinion sentence, then support it with specific reasons or examples and a linking word (e.g., “Yes, I think bikes are popular because...” ). Keep answers natural and concise.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, cities have bike lanes and bike-sharing programs, so students and workers often choose cycling to avoid traffic.

× Did you have a bug when you have when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student used 'bug' and duplicated 'have' creating an incorrect word choice and sentence structure. The question asks about possession in the past, so use 'Did you have' + object in past context. Replace 'bug' with 'bike' (the intended word) and remove the extra 'have when'. Suggestion: listen carefully to the word 'bike', avoid repeating auxiliary verbs, and form the past question as 'Did you have + noun' (e.g., 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?').

× Do you think bags are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The student answered with 'bags' instead of 'bikes', which is a wrong word choice and changes the meaning. The examiner asked about 'bikes', so respond using the same noun to keep relevance. Suggestion: repeat the key noun from the question when answering to avoid incorrect substitutions (e.g., 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?').