Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Correct the tense and make the response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add one specific supporting detail (like age, how often you rode it, or a memorable moment). Use linking words such as “and” or “when” for coherence. Keep to no more than 3–4 short sentences.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was seven and rode it to school almost every day. It was bright red and I remember learning to ride it in the park with my father.

提案: Use correct grammar (’popular’ needs an auxiliary like ‘very’ or rephrase) and give a specific reason or example to support your view. Begin with a clear opinion sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words like ‘because’ or ‘for example’. Keep answers concise and natural.

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, in cities you often see people cycling to work to avoid traffic and save money on transport.

× Yes, I have a bike when I am in my childhood.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The response refers to a past time (childhood) so present tense 'have' and 'am' are incorrect. Use simple past 'had' and 'was' to match the past timeframe. Suggestion: identify the time reference first (e.g., 'when I was a child') then use past tense verbs for actions or states in that period.

× Yes, bikes are much popular in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country.

The phrase 'much popular' is ungrammatical because 'popular' is an adjective that normally takes 'very' or 'quite' for degree, not 'much' before the adjective. Use 'very popular' or 'quite popular'. Also ensure subject-verb agreement and word order are correct; here only the degree word needed changing.