Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你把考官的问题重复了一遍，而没有直接回答问题。请直接用第一人称回答并补充一到两个具体细节，比如什么时候得到、经常去哪儿骑或和谁一起骑。注意答案要自然、简短（最多5句），并使用连接词使句子流畅。

例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was eight and rode it almost every day to my friend’s house. Because our neighborhood was quiet, I felt safe practicing longer rides, and I remember learning to ride without training wheels in one afternoon.

提案: 你再次重复了考官的问题而没有给出观点或理由。请直接表达你的看法，并用一到两个具体原因或例子支持你的观点，使用连接词（like, because, for example）提高连贯性。保持简短且信息具体。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, cities have dedicated bike lanes and I often see people cycling to work or to the market on weekends.

× Do you think bike are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

错误类型：There be（存在/数）问题。解释：主语是复数名词 bikes，但谓语使用了复数形式 are，句子中还缺少名词复数形式的复数标记。原句中的 bike 为单数形式，但语境询问一般情况应使用复数。改正：将 bike 改为复数 bikes，从而主语与谓语一致。建议：遇到泛指事物用复数形式（e.g. bikes, cars），注意名词单复数形式。

× Did you have a bike while you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

错误类型：There be issue（时间连词使用不当/句子自然表达问题）。解释：原句用 while 引导时间状语从句通常表示两个动作同时进行（e.g. I played while he watched），但询问过去是否拥有某物时更常用 when 表示在……期间。因此把 while 改为 when 更符合习惯表达。建议：区分 when（在某段时间）和 while（在……期间/同时发生的两个动作），询问过去拥有经历用 when。