Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn đã dùng câu hỏi thay vì trả lời, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm (pie → bike, achieved → a child). Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, dùng một câu chủ đề và thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết liên quan đến trải nghiệm cá nhân. Sửa ngữ pháp (past tense), dùng từ đúng và rõ ràng. Ví dụ nói về khi nào bạn có xe đạp, ai tặng, và tần suất sử dụng.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was seven, and I used it almost every day to ride to my friend's house. I especially remember learning to ride in the park near our home.

提案: Câu này ngắn, có lỗi từ vựng (by → be) và cấu trúc không hoàn chỉnh. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp với câu chủ đề rồi đưa thêm lý do cụ thể và ví dụ, sử dụng liên từ để nối ý (because, so, for example). Tránh sai động từ và đảm bảo subject-verb agreement.

例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, students often cycle to school, and in cities you can see many bike lanes that encourage cycling.

× Did you have a pie when you were achieved?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student used wrong words: 'pie' instead of 'bike' and 'achieved' instead of 'a child'. This is a sentence structure and word choice error. The correct question asks about possession in the past: 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' Suggestion: learn common vocabulary pairs for questions about childhood (child, kid) and check that verbs like 'achieve' are not confused with nouns like 'child'. Use simple past question form 'Did you have...' for past possession.

× Yeah, I think by a popular in your country.

✓ Yeah, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The student wrote 'by a popular in your country' which has multiple errors: wrong word 'by' should be 'bikes', incorrect article 'a', wrong pronoun 'your' instead of 'my', and incorrect word order. The correct answer agrees with the examiner's question about bikes in the student's country, using present simple passive-like description: 'bikes are popular in my country.' Suggestion: ensure subject matches (bikes), use 'are' for plural subject, choose correct possessive adjective ('my' for the student's country), and avoid unnecessary articles.