Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. For Part 1 you should answer directly with a clear topic sentence and then add one or two brief supporting details (maximum 5 sentences). Use linking words if you add details. Be specific about the bike (e.g., who gave it, how often you used it, a memory).

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought for my seventh birthday, and I used it almost every day to ride to the park. Because it was light and easy to handle, I quickly learned to ride without training wheels.

提案: Your answer tries to respond but has mistakes and unclear content (you wrote 'Banks' instead of 'bikes'), and it lacks supporting detail. Improve accuracy, use appropriate vocabulary, and add a reason with a linking word. Keep it concise and specific (1–3 sentences).

例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in China because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, in cities you can see many shared bicycles on the streets, which makes cycling convenient and affordable.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I did.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. This is a sentence structure/response error: the reply should be a statement answering the yes/no question. Use the past simple auxiliary 'did' to form the short positive response 'Yes, I did.' or give a full sentence 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.' Ensure the tense matches the question (past).

× Yes, I think so, because my country is China. Banks are very popular here.

✓ Yes, I think so, because in my country, bicycles are very popular.

The student used 'Banks' instead of 'bikes' (a wrong word choice), causing a meaning error. Also 'my country is China' is a strange insert and not necessary; better phrase 'in my country' to connect idea. Keep present simple for general fact: 'are very popular.' Suggestion: replace incorrect word with 'bicycles' or 'bikes,' remove unnecessary clause or rephrase as 'in my country' and maintain present simple for general statements.