Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the answer grammatically correct, more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and pronouns, and give one or two specific supporting details using linking words (for example, 'but' or 'however'). Avoid irrelevant words and keep it under five sentences.

例: Yes, I did. I often rode my bike when I was a child, but I stopped for a while after a bad accident: I crashed into a tree and hurt my knee. However, I still remember enjoying the freedom of riding around the neighborhood before the accident.

提案: Provide a clear opinion first, then support it with specific reasons and linking words. Correct grammar (use 'are'/'is', 'nowadays' once) and more precise vocabulary (e.g., 'public transport' or 'cars'). Keep it concise and include one or two concrete examples or contrasts.

例: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country nowadays, mainly because public transport and cars are more convenient. For example, many people prefer buses or motorcycles for long distances, and city infrastructure often favors motor vehicles over bike lanes.

× Yes I did. I used to bike when I were shy but I have a bad experience about bike because when I was young I ride a bike and I smash with a tree.

✓ Yes, I did. I used to ride a bike when I was a child, but I had a bad experience with a bike because when I was young I rode a bike and crashed into a tree.

Multiple past-tense errors: 'used to bike' is acceptable but 'ride a bike' is more natural; 'were' should be 'was' to match singular subject 'I' (past tense of be). 'I have a bad experience' should be past tense 'I had a bad experience' because it refers to a past event. 'I ride a bike' should be 'I rode a bike' (simple past). 'I smash with a tree' is incorrect verb choice and structure; use 'crashed into a tree' for past action. Suggestion: keep all verbs referring to that childhood event in past tense and use appropriate verbs (ride/rode, crash into).

× I think is not pretty popular in my country because now nowadays technology is high and comfortable to transport like a you have a bus.

✓ I don't think bikes are very popular in my country nowadays because technology has improved and public transport, like buses, is convenient.

Errors with present tense and sentence structure: 'I think is not pretty popular' lacks a subject and uses 'pretty' incorrectly; use 'I don't think bikes are very popular'. 'Now nowadays' is redundant; use 'nowadays'. 'Technology is high' is incorrect expression; use 'technology has improved' or 'technological development is high'. 'and comfortable to transport like a you have a bus' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'and public transport, like buses, is convenient.' Suggestions: include subject for 'think', use 'don't think' for negative, avoid redundant words, and use natural collocations (public transport, convenient).