Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời hiện tại ngắn, sai từ vựng (wore không đúng) và thiếu chi tiết. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và thêm 1–2 câu bổ sung để mô tả (ví dụ: ai tặng, loại xe, bạn đã sử dụng như thế nào, kỷ niệm). Sử dụng liên từ nếu cần để nối ý. Giữ tối đa 5 câu.

例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. It was a small red bike that my parents bought for me when I was seven. I used it every day to ride around the neighbourhood with my friends, and I remember learning to ride without training wheels one summer.

提案: Câu trả lời mơ hồ, ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: "it is yield" không rõ nghĩa). Hãy nêu quan điểm rõ ràng, giải thích lý do cụ thể và dùng liên từ để nối ý. Thêm 1–2 lý do, ví dụ về hoàn cảnh sử dụng xe đạp để làm rõ quan điểm. Giữ tối đa 5 câu.

例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country. Many people use them for short trips and commuting because they are cheap and convenient. In cities, you can also see more bike lanes and rental services, which makes cycling easier for lots of residents.

× Yes, I wore a.

✓ Yes, I had one.

The student used 'wore' which is for wearing clothes, not for owning objects. The correct verb for possession is 'have' in the past: 'had'. Also the fragment 'a' is incomplete; specify 'one' or 'a bike'. Suggestion: use 'Yes, I had one' or 'Yes, I had a bike.'

× Yes, because it is yield however many people.

✓ Yes, because they are useful to many people.

Original sentence contains several errors: 'it' incorrectly refers to 'bikes' (plural) so use plural pronoun 'they' (subject-verb agreement). 'is yield' is incorrect word choice; likely intended 'useful' or 'convenient'. 'however many people' is ungrammatical; use 'to many people' to express that many people find them useful. Suggestion: 'Yes, because they are useful to many people.' or 'Yes, because many people find them useful.'