Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ краткий, но неправильная грамматика и формулировка. Нужно использовать правильное время (past) и полное предложение, добавить одно-два уточняющих предложения для содержания. Также избегайте повторов и лишних слов. Например: начните с тематического предложения (Yes, I did.), далее опишите велосипед (what kind) и возможно упомяните, почему он вам нравился или как часто вы его использовали.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle with training wheels when I was about six years old. I used to ride it around my neighborhood almost every day because it was fast and easy to control.

提案: Ответ неясен, содержит повторения и бессвязные слова. Нужно дать ясный прямой ответ, затем пояснить с конкретными деталями и связующими словами (for example, however, because). Упомяните факторы популярности (экономия, транспортные пробки, рост велоинфраструктуры) и, если уместно, контраст с автомобилями или электросамокатами.

例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular, especially in cities. For example, many people choose bikes to avoid traffic and save money on transport. However, in some areas cars and electric scooters are more common because distances are longer.

× Yes, I have a bike, a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The examiner asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use the past simple tense. 'Have' is present tense; 'had' is past tense. Also the phrase 'a child' is unnecessary and incorrect here; it should be part of the question context, not the answer. Suggestion: match the tense of the question by using past simple: 'I had a bike when I was a child.'

× Yes, I think, I think. Popular spikes, but poplars and and poplars car and semiconductor and electric car.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular, but cars, semiconductors and electric cars are becoming more common.

The original reply is fragmented and contains repeated words and incorrect vocabulary ('spikes', 'poplars', repeated 'and'). This is a sentence structure and word choice problem. The student should produce a coherent sentence with subject and verb and correct nouns. Also use plural forms where appropriate ('cars', 'electric cars'). Suggestion: organize ideas into a clear contrast: 'Bikes are popular, but cars and electric vehicles are becoming more common.'