Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is natural and direct, but it can be improved by avoiding filler phrases (e.g. “That's a good question”) and by adding one or two specific supporting details using a linking word. Keep answers concise (max 5 sentences). For example, briefly mention what kind of bike it was or a memory to enrich the response.

例: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I learned to ride it in my neighborhood park. Because my parents encouraged me to practice every weekend, I became confident riding without help by the age of seven.

提案: Your answer states a clear opinion and gives a reason, but avoid filler phrases and expand the reasoning with a linking word and a specific example. Also try to use a wider range of vocabulary (e.g. ‘infrastructure’, ‘unsafe’, ‘uneven surfaces’). Aim for two to three concise sentences to explain and support your view.

例: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because the roads are often uneven and poorly maintained. As a result, many people prefer motorbikes or cars for safety and convenience, so cycling is less common in cities.

× That's a good question though, yes I did have a bike when I was a child.

✓ That's a good question. Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The original sentence uses an unnecessary auxiliary 'did' with the affirmative past-tense verb 'have' and combines two clauses with an informal 'though' causing awkwardness. In simple past affirmative statements, use the past tense verb without 'did' (subject + past verb). Also separate responses into clearer sentences: 'That's a good question.' then 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.' This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× That's another good question. No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country because my country has bumpy roads.

✓ That's another good question. No, I don't think bicycles are popular in my country because our roads are often bumpy.

The original is understandable but can be improved: 'bikes' is fine but 'bicycles' is slightly more formal. More importantly, repeating 'my country' is redundant; use 'our roads' for naturalness. Also 'has bumpy roads' is grammatical but 'roads are often bumpy' is a clearer adjectival construction (subject + linking verb + adjective). The tense/modal 'don't think' is correct for present opinion, so keep it. Suggestion: avoid repetition and use natural subject-verb structures such as 'roads are bumpy'.