Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Expand your answer with a brief topic sentence and one short reason or detail. Use natural phrasing and avoid one-word replies. Keep it under 3 sentences and use a linking word if you add a reason.

例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked to school because my family lived close by, so there was no need for a bicycle.

提案: Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and fix grammar (use 'they are' or 'bicycles are', and natural prepositions like 'in my country'). Keep answers concise (2–3 sentences).

例: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country. For example, many people use them for short commutes and I often see groups of cyclists on city bike lanes, especially on weekends.

× Yes, it is.

✓ Yes, they are.

The student refers to 'bikes' which is plural, so the pronoun and verb must be plural. 'It is' is singular and does not agree with the plural noun. Use 'they are' to match plural reference. Suggestion: Match pronouns and verbs to the number of the noun (plural bikes → they are).

× They're so very popular in here in the in our country.

✓ They're very popular here in our country.

Redundant and incorrect prepositions: 'in here' and 'in the in our country' are awkward and ungrammatical. Use 'here' to indicate location and 'in our country' to specify the country; combine them simply as 'here in our country.' Also 'so very' is informal and can be simplified to 'very' for clarity. Suggestion: Remove redundant prepositions and words, keep 'here in our country.'

× I can see many bikers in here.

✓ I can see many bikers here.

The phrase 'in here' is unnecessary or incorrect in this context. 'Here' alone correctly indicates the present location. 'In here' is used when emphasizing being inside a specific enclosed space; for general location 'here' is sufficient. Suggestion: Use 'here' for general locations; reserve 'in here' for specific enclosed spaces.