Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is direct and correct but too short and repetitive. To improve, start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details (when you got it, who gave it to you, or a memorable experience). Keep responses natural and avoid repeating the same words. Use one linking phrase to connect ideas.

例: Yes, I did — I had a small red bicycle when I was about seven. It was a gift from my parents, and I remember learning to ride it in the park near our house. Because it had training wheels at first, I felt confident quickly and rode it every day during summer.

提案: Your response answers the question but contains grammatical errors and repetition. Improve accuracy by using correct subject-verb agreement and avoiding duplication. Add a specific reason or example and use a linking word to make it coherent (e.g., “because” or “for example”).

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many people use bicycles to commute to work in the morning, and cities often have bike lanes that make cycling safer.

× I think that bikes are popular in my country. Almost everyone have bike have a bike.

✓ I think that bikes are popular in my country. Almost everyone has a bike.

The error is subject-verb agreement: 'everyone' is singular and requires a singular verb form 'has' rather than 'have'. Also the noun phrase needs the article 'a' before 'bike' to indicate one bike per person. Suggestion: use 'everyone has a bike' or 'almost everyone owns a bike'.