Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is grammatically correct and concise, but it's very brief and doesn't expand with supporting details. To improve, add a topic sentence followed by one or two specific supporting details (reason, brief example, or how you felt) and use a linking word to connect ideas. Keep it natural and limit to about 2–4 sentences.

例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually borrowed one from my neighbor because my family couldn't afford to buy one, so I rode only at weekends and special occasions.

提案: This answer expresses your opinion but lacks supporting reasons and specifics. Improve by stating your view clearly, then give one or two specific reasons or comparisons and use a linking word (for example, because, however, so) to make it coherent. Aim for 2–3 sentences with relevant vocabulary.

例: No, I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because most people prefer motorcycles or cars for commuting. For example, there are few cycling lanes and traffic conditions make riding a bike less safe, so many avoid it.

× I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The sentence is grammatically correct. It uses the past simple negative appropriately to refer to a past habitual state. No changes needed.

× I don't really think bikes are popular in my country.

✓ I don't really think bikes are popular in my country.

The sentence is grammatically correct. It properly uses the present simple to state a current opinion and plural noun agreement for 'bikes'. No changes needed.