Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap kısa ve doğrudan; ancak daha doğal ve bilgilendirici olması için genişletilebilir. Konu cümlesiyle başlayıp, bisikleti neden kullanamadığınızı veya nasıl öğrendiğinizi belirtin. Bağlaçlar (for example, because, so) kullanarak açıklama ekleyin ve 2–4 cümleye sığdırın. Ayrıca dilbilgisi açısından "use it" yerine "ride it" daha doğal olur.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, but I couldn't ride it at first. For example, I was afraid of falling, so my older brother helped me by holding the seat until I gained confidence. After a few lessons, I was able to ride short distances on my own.

提案: Cevap fikir veriyor ama genelleme ve dilbilgisi hataları var. Daha doğal ifade için "Yes" tek başına yeterli; "'cause" yerine "because" kullanın. Destek için daha geniş kanıt veya karşılaştırma verin (ör. şehirlerde kullanım, ulaşım amacı, spor). Cümleleri bağlamak için "because", "for example" veya "also" gibi bağlaçlar kullanın. Ayrıca tense ve article hatalarını düzeltin: "when they were children."

例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities you often see students and office workers cycling to work, and weekend cycling has also become a common hobby.

× Yeah, yes, I think 'cause most of my friends used to ride bikes when they were child.

✓ Yeah, yes, I think 'cause most of my friends used to ride bikes when they were children.

The noun 'child' must be plural ('children') because the subject 'my friends' refers to multiple people. Use 'children' to agree in number with the plural subject. Suggestion: match the number of nouns to their subjects (my friends -> children).