Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Jawaban Anda sangat singkat dan tidak menjawab pertanyaan. Tingkatkan struktur dengan langsung menjawab (topic sentence), lalu tambahkan 1–2 kalimat pendukung yang spesifik menggunakan linking words seperti "because" atau "when". Juga perbaiki tata bahasa dasar (gunakan past tense untuk pengalaman masa lalu) dan hindari kalimat yang tidak relevan.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about eight, and I learned to ride it in my neighborhood park. Because I practised every weekend, I became more confident and often cycled to my friends' houses.

提案: Jawaban terlalu singkat dan tidak cukup mendukung pendapat. Berikan satu kalimat topik yang jelas, lalu tambahkan satu atau dua alasan spesifik dengan linking words seperti "because" atau "for example". Gunakan kosakata relevan (e.g., "commuting", "environmentally friendly").

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, in cities there are bike lanes and many students ride to university to avoid traffic.

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✓ I speak English.

The sentence uses the incorrect verb form 'I'm speak' which combines the present continuous auxiliary 'am' with the base verb 'speak' incorrectly. The correct simple present form is 'I speak English.' Use simple present for habitual ability or general fact. Suggestion: use 'I speak' or 'I can speak' if meaning ability (e.g., 'I can speak English'). Grammar problem type ID:26