Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Jawaban Anda singkat dan jelas, tetapi bisa diperbaiki dengan menambahkan detail pendukung untuk membuatnya lebih natural dan informatif. Berikan satu atau dua kalimat tambahan yang menjelaskan jenis sepeda, siapa yang memberikannya, atau kegiatan yang sering Anda lakukan dengan sepeda. Gunakan kata penghubung sederhana jika menambahkan lebih dari satu ide.

例: Yes, of course. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought for me when I was seven, and I used to ride it to the park almost every afternoon.

提案: Jawaban mengandung kesalahan tata bahasa dan pilihan kata yang kurang tepat, serta kurang spesifik. Perbaiki grammar (subjek-kata kerja dan struktur), gunakan kosakata yang relevan, dan tambahkan alasan atau contoh untuk mendukung pendapat Anda. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk menjelaskan alasan secara logis.

例: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country because many people prefer motorcycles for commuting. For example, motorcycles are cheaper to buy and easier to park in crowded cities.

× I don't think so. The people in here was most like the motorcycle.

✓ I don't think so. The people here mostly like motorcycles.

The error is subject-verb agreement and incorrect word choice. 'The people' is a plural subject, so the verb must be plural: use 'like' not 'was'. 'In here' is unnatural; use 'here'. 'Most like the motorcycle' is ungrammatical for general preference; use 'mostly like motorcycles' to indicate a general tendency. Suggestion: use plural nouns with plural verbs, place adverb 'mostly' before the verb, and use 'motorcycles' to refer generally to that mode of transport.