Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 首先，你的回答要直接回应问题并以主题句开头，例如明确说“我认为自行车不太受欢迎”。句子需要语法正确并避免重复（如重复使用“in our country”）。其次，应补充具体细节来支持观点，例如说明原因（地铁方便、城市规划、气候、安全问题等），并使用连接词使表达连贯（because / moreover / however / for example）。注意用词准确（不要说“traffic vacation”），并把答案控制在3-5句以内。最后适当使用更丰富的词汇，例如“public transport”“convenient”“cycling infrastructure”。

例: I don’t think bicycles are very popular in my country because most people prefer the subway for its speed and convenience. Moreover, many cities lack safe cycling lanes, so riding a bike can feel dangerous. For example, I rarely see commuters cycling to work, especially during rush hour.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

原句是学生重复考官的问题，没有回答。根据英语语法，过去时间的询问（Did ... when you were a child）应使用一般过去时回答。建议在回答时用一般过去时态，如 “I had...”。另外补充肯定或否定词以构成完整回答。

× I don't think bikes are popular in our country because in our country we always use the subway and another traffic vacation.

✓ I don't think bicycles are popular in my country because we always use the subway and other means of transport.

错误点包括用词和时态的选择：句首的现在时 “I don't think” 合适，但后半句中用词不当。"bikes" 可改为更正式的 "bicycles"（不是必须，属风格问题，可保留）。“in our country” 两次重复冗余，合并为一次更自然。短语 "another traffic vacation" 是错误表达，可能想说“其他交通方式”或“其他交通工具”。应使用 "other means of transport" 或 "other forms of transportation"。此外“always use the subway” 用法可接受，但与后半部分并列时，用复数或统一结构更好。建议简化句子并用常见搭配："we always use the subway and other means of transport." 以上修改保持了原句的现在时态和否定观点。