Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Correct basic grammar (past tense and articles), make answer natural and slightly expand with one reason or brief detail. Use past tense: "I didn't have a bike when I was a child." Then add a short supporting detail using a linking word (e.g., "because" or "so"). Keep to 1–3 sentences.

例: I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn't afford one. As a result, I usually walked to school or took the bus.

提案: Improve grammar, clarity and specificity. Start with a clear topic sentence in present simple: "Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country." Then give a specific reason and an example, using linking words like "because" or "for example." Avoid vague phrases like "everybody doing his work." Keep to 1–3 sentences.

例: Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many people cycle to markets and offices in the city to avoid traffic and save money.

× No, I have no bike when I were child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

This sentence mixes present simple 'have' with a past time reference and uses incorrect past form 'were' with singular subject. The context asks about the past, so use past simple negative 'didn't have' and correct subject-verb agreement in past 'was' for 'I'. Suggestion: use past simple for past situations: 'I didn't have a bike' and 'I was a child'.

× Yes, I think in my country bikes are more popular because everybody doing his work and.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because everybody uses them to get to work.

The original sentence misplaces 'in my country' and uses present continuous 'doing' incorrectly without an auxiliary, and ends abruptly with 'and'. For general truths use present simple: 'bikes are very popular'. Also 'everybody doing his work' is ungrammatical and awkward; use 'everybody uses them to get to work' or 'many people use bikes to commute'. Suggestion: keep present simple for facts and use clear verb constructions like 'use them to get to work'.