Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Reply directly and with correct tense and number. Use a topic sentence in past tense, add one or two brief supporting details (reason or a memory), and keep under five sentences. Also correct grammar (e.g. “I didn’t have a bike” not “I don't have any”).

例: I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn’t afford one, so I usually walked to school. Occasionally I borrowed a neighbour’s bike, which felt exciting but also a bit risky.

提案: Make your opinion clear and grammatically correct, use linking words to organize supporting details, and give a specific reason or example. Correct subject-verb agreement (e.g. “every child has” and “kids love”). Keep it concise and natural (max 5 sentences).

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many children have their own bikes and parents often buy them for birthdays. Moreover, bikes are common for short journeys because they’re affordable and convenient.

× No, I don't have any.

✓ No, I didn't have one.

The question asks about the past ('Did you have a bike when you were a child?'), so the answer should use past tense. 'Don't have' is present tense. Also 'any' without noun is informal; use 'one' or 'a bike'. Suggestion: use past simple 'didn't have' and include the noun 'bike' or use 'one'.

× Yes, I think every child have their own bike in our country and kids loves to play this bike, so I think somewhat popular.

✓ Yes, I think every child has their own bike in our country, and kids love to ride them, so I think they are somewhat popular.

Several grammar issues: 'every child' is singular and requires singular verb 'has' (Grammar problem type 1/27). 'Their' is acceptable as singular gender-neutral possessive. 'Kids loves' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; plural 'kids' requires 'love'. 'Play this bike' is unnatural: we 'ride' bikes and use plural pronoun 'them' to refer to 'bikes'. Also combine clauses and ensure verb tense remains present because the question asks about current popularity. Finally, include 'they are' to form a complete clause rather than 'so I think somewhat popular'. Suggestion: use 'has', 'love', 'ride them', and add 'they are' for clarity.