Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap kısa ve dolaysız değil; ayrıca soruyu tekrar etmişsiniz. Doğrudan yanıt verin, ardından kısa bir destekleyici detay ekleyin. Bağlaçlar (ör. "because", "so", "when") kullanarak mantıklı bir yapı oluşturun. Ayrıca maksimum 5 cümleyi aşmayın. Örnek olarak geçmiş zamana uygun fiil formlarını (had, used to, rode) kullanın ve spesifik bir anı veya sebep ekleyin.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it to my friend’s house every weekend because it was a quick and fun way to travel. I remember once I learned to ride without training wheels in our local park, which made me really proud.

提案: Cevabınız anlaşılır ama dilbilgisi hataları ve kelime seçimi var; daha doğal ve akıcı ifade kullanın. Doğrudan görüşünüzü söyleyip, ardından nedenini spesifik örneklerle destekleyin. Bağlaçlarla cümleleri bağlayın (e.g. "because", "however", "for example"). Ayrıca daha uygun kelimeler kullanın: "not very popular", "in many places", "infrastructure" gibi terimler yardımcı olur.

例: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because many cities lack proper cycling infrastructure. For example, there are few bike lanes, and busy traffic makes cycling unsafe, so most people prefer cars or public transport.

× I think not too much because the roads are not available to use bike in everywhere.

✓ I don't think they are very popular because the roads are not suitable for riding bikes everywhere.

The sentence has multiple preposition and word choice errors. 'I think not too much' is awkward; use 'I don't think they are very popular.' 'Available to use bike in everywhere' is ungrammatical: 'available to use' is incorrect and 'in everywhere' should be 'everywhere' or 'in every place.' Use 'suitable for riding bikes' to express that roads are not appropriate for biking. Also plural 'bikes' matches general reference. Suggestion: say 'I don't think they are very popular because the roads are not suitable for riding bikes everywhere.'