Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 문법과 시제 사용이 부정확합니다. 과거 경험을 말할 때는 과거 시제를 사용해야 하고, 중복 표현(예: "I didn't. I'm not good at riding a bike")과 어색한 표현을 줄여야 합니다. 또한 답변 구조를 개선해 주제문(간단한 직접대응) → 이유 → 구체적 예 순으로 구성하고, 문장을 3~4문장으로 간결하게 유지하세요. 연결어(예: because, so, instead)를 적절히 사용해 흐름을 자연스럽게 만드세요.

例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I wasn't confident about riding. Instead, I enjoyed inline skating, which I practiced often at the local park. Because of that, I became quite skilled at skating rather than cycling.

提案: 의미는 전달되지만 어법과 단어 선택, 문장 구조를 다듬어야 합니다. 주제문으로 직접 답한 뒤 이유와 구체적 예(누가, 언제, 어디서 자전거를 타는지)를 덧붙이세요. 복수형과 관사 사용(예: "middle school students")에 주의하고, 연결어(for example, often, especially)를 사용해 문장을 자연스럽게 이어가세요.

例: Yes, bicycles are very popular in Korea. Many middle and high school students, and even some adults, often ride bikes to school or when hanging out with friends. For example, it's common to see groups of students cycling along river parks on weekends.

× No, I don't have a bike when I was children because I I didn't.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I wasn't good at riding.

The sentence mixes present tense 'don't have' with past time expression 'when I was'. Use past tense 'didn't have'. Also 'children' is plural while the subject refers to 'I', so use 'a child'. Remove duplicated 'I'. Ensure verb 'to be' in past ('was') matches singular subject.

× I'm not good at riding a bike and I love it in nice skating instead of biking a bike.

✓ I'm not good at riding a bike, and I prefer inline skating to biking.

The original uses awkward conjunction and phrasing 'love it in nice skating' which is ungrammatical. Use 'prefer X to Y' or 'I like inline skating more than biking'. Also 'inline skating' is the correct term and avoid 'biking a bike' redundancy.

× So I ride in line skating usual.

✓ So I usually go inline skating.

Preposition and word order are incorrect. Use 'usually' before the verb and the correct term 'inline skating'. 'Go inline skating' is natural collocation.

× Yes, very famous in Korea.

✓ Yes, they are very popular in Korea.

Sentence is missing subject and auxiliary verb. Use subject 'they' (bikes) and 'are' to form a complete sentence. 'Popular' is the correct adjective for 'famous' in this context.

× Most of all middle school student or high school student or even adults riding a bike when they go to school or hang out with friends.

✓ Most middle and high school students, and even many adults, ride bikes when they go to school or hang out with friends.

Subject-verb number agreement and pluralization are wrong: use 'students' plural and verb 'ride' to match. Use commas and articles appropriately and 'ride bikes' is natural. 'Most of all' is incorrect; use 'Most' or 'Most of the' as appropriate.