Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response repeated the examiner’s question instead of answering. For Part 1 you should answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep answers natural, concise (no more than 5 sentences), and avoid repeating the prompt. For example, state whether you had a bike, give a reason or short description, and perhaps mention how often you used it.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used it almost every day to go to school and visit friends, so I became quite confident riding on busy streets. Because of that, I still enjoy cycling for short trips today.

提案: Your answer has some useful content but contains pronunciation/word-choice errors and an odd word (“bye”) that breaks fluency. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words (for example, because/so/therefore). Mention who uses bikes and in what situations to show depth. Keep it coherent and limit to 2–4 sentences.

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short journeys. For instance, many students and commuters cycle to work or school, especially in cities where traffic is heavy. As a result, cycling is an important part of daily life for a lot of people.

× Yes, bye. Make daily life easy and they were very popular in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes make daily life easier and they have been very popular in my country.

The student's sentence used 'bye' (a homophone error) instead of 'bikes' and mixed tenses awkwardly. This error falls outside the provided list exactly, but the main grammatical issues relate to adjective form and tense: 'Make daily life easy' should use comparative adjective 'easier' to compare states, and 'they were very popular' suggests past-only; the question asks about current popularity so present perfect 'have been very popular' or simple present 'are very popular' is better. Suggestion: replace 'bye' with 'bikes', use 'make daily life easier' to correctly modify the verb 'make', and use 'are very popular' or 'have been very popular' to match the time frame.