Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 질문을 그대로 반복한 답변은 점수를 받을 수 없습니다. 검사관의 질문에 직접적으로 답하는 주제문을 먼저 말한 뒤, 연결어(for example, when, because 등)를 사용해 구체적인 세부사항(언제, 누구에게 받았는지, 얼마나 자주 탔는지, 특별한 추억 등)을 2~3문장으로 덧붙이세요. 문장은 최대 5문장을 넘기지 마십시오.

例: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle when I was about seven, which my parents bought for me as a birthday present. Because I lived near a park, I rode it almost every day with my friends, and I remember practicing until I could ride without training wheels.

提案: 질문을 질문으로 반복하지 말고 본인의 의견을 명확히 제시하세요(예: Yes, I think so / No, not really). 그 다음 연결어(For example, However, In addition 등)를 사용해 이유와 구체적 사례(도시 vs 시골의 차이, 자전거 전용 도로, 통근 수단으로의 사용 등)를 2~3문장으로 설명하세요. 구체적인 통계나 개인 경험을 넣으면 더 설득력 있습니다.

例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country. For example, many people use them for short commutes because cities have dedicated bike lanes and bike-share programs. However, they are more common in urban areas than in rural regions where distances tend to be longer.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26) because the reply lacks a verb phrase that answers the question. Use a past simple affirmative response to match the past-time question: 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.' For improvement, practice forming direct answers to wh- and yes/no questions by identifying the required tense (past simple here) and producing a subject + past verb + object pattern. Note: Keep responses concise and relevant to the question.

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26) because the reply does not provide a personal answer. Use present simple to express general opinion: 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.' For improvement, practice converting questions into statements by keeping the same tense and adding a subject and verb for your opinion (I think...).