Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Perbaikan: Perbaiki tata bahasa (tense dan artikel), buat jawaban langsung dengan kalimat topik, dan tambahkan detail singkat (mis. siapa yang memberi, kapan atau bagaimana Anda menggunakannya). Gunakan maksimal 3–4 kalimat untuk tetap alami. Contoh fokus: gunakan past tense 'had' dan artikel 'a'.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was seven, and I rode it to school and the park almost every day. I especially liked racing with my friends on weekends.

提案: Perbaikan: Perbaiki struktur kalimat dan kosakata (subjek-verb agreement, singular/plural), jelaskan alasan dengan contoh spesifik dan gunakan linking words seperti 'because' atau 'for example'. Hindari pengulangan 'yeah'. Batasi jawaban pada 2–4 kalimat agar lebih efektif.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips. For example, children and teenagers often ride bikes in city parks and around stations in the evenings, and some adults cycle to work to avoid traffic.

× Yeah, I have a bike when I was child.

✓ Yeah, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student used present tense 'have' with a past-time clause 'when I was a child'. Use past simple 'had' for past situations. Also missing article 'a' before 'child'. Suggestion: use past tense for experiences in the past and include necessary articles ('a child').

× Yeah, but it's popular in my country because the child is ride a bike on the station city in the evening every day. Yeah.

✓ Yeah, but bikes are popular in my country because children ride bikes at the city station in the evenings every day.

Multiple issues: 'it's popular' uses singular pronoun for plural 'bikes' — use 'bikes are popular' (subject-verb agreement). 'the child' should be plural 'children' when speaking generally. 'is ride' is incorrect verb form; use base form 'ride' after plural subject. Preposition 'on the station city' is incorrect; use 'at the city station'. 'in the evening every day' is better as 'in the evenings every day' to indicate routine. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general statements, correct verb forms, and appropriate prepositions and time expressions.