Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Используйте правильное время и грамматику, говорите полными предложениями и избегайте ошибок в местоимениях и временах. Начните с прямого ответа и добавьте одну-две короткие детали, используя связку (например, "because" или "and") для плавности. Также исправьте произношение и словообразование (where → were, have → had).

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used it almost every day to ride to my friend’s house and to the park because it was my main way to get around.

提案: Сформулируйте прямо своё мнение, используйте связки для объяснения причины и давайте конкретные детали. Избегайте прямого перевода с родного языка; употребляйте правильные структуры (например, "In my country, cars are more popular than bikes because..."). Уточняйте насколько популярны велосипеды и приводите пример или сравнение.

例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Cars are much more common because many people prefer the convenience and there is limited cycling infrastructure in cities.

× Yeah, when I where a child. I have a bike.

✓ Yeah, when I was a child, I had a bike.

The student used the wrong pronoun/word 'where' instead of the past form 'was' of the verb to be for first person singular; this is a subject–verb form error. Also tense consistency: the question asks about the past, so 'had' (past simple) is correct instead of present 'have'. Suggestion: use 'was' for 'I' in past ('I was') and use past tense 'had' to describe possession in the past: 'I was a child' and 'I had a bike.'

× A car is so popular back in my country, how many people are? Has driver who is car.

✓ Cars are more popular in my country; many people have cars and drive them.

Multiple issues: singular/plural and subject-verb agreement ('A car is so popular' should be plural 'Cars are' when speaking generally), incorrect word order and missing subjects ('Has driver who is car' is ungrammatical). The sentence also mixes present general statements so use simple present plural: 'many people have cars' and 'they drive them.' Suggestion: use plural nouns and correct verb forms for general statements: 'Cars are popular' and 'many people have cars and drive them.'