Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Jawaban hanya mengulang pertanyaan dan tidak memberikan informasi. Untuk meningkatkan, jawab langsung dengan kalimat topik yang jelas, tambahkan 1–2 kalimat dukungan yang spesifik (mis. kapan atau siapa yang membelinya, bagaimana Anda menggunakannya), dan gunakan kata penghubung jika perlu. Batasi jawaban hingga maksimal 5 kalimat dan hindari pengulangan. Contoh langkah perbaikan: 1) Jawab singkat dan jelas; 2) Tambahkan detail konkret; 3) Gunakan kata penghubung untuk kohesi.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was about seven. My parents bought it for me as a birthday present, and I rode it almost every day to visit my friends in the neighborhood. Because the roads were quiet, I felt safe practicing new tricks and gradually became more confident riding longer distances.

提案: Jawaban mengulang pertanyaan tanpa memberikan pendapat atau alasan. Perbaiki dengan memberikan opini langsung, jelaskan alasan konkris (mis. penggunaan untuk rekreasi, olahraga, atau transportasi), dan sertakan contoh atau perbandingan singkat. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk menjelaskan sebab-akibat atau kontras. Langkah perbaikan: 1) Nyatakan opini; 2) Berikan 1–2 alasan spesifik; 3) Tambahkan contoh atau hasil singkat.

例: I think bikes are moderately popular in my country. Many people use them for exercise and short trips, especially in parks and near schools, but they are less common as a daily commuting option because city traffic and limited bike lanes make cycling inconvenient.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student's reply repeated the examiner's question instead of providing an answer. This is a sentence structure/use error: a question requires an answer, not a repetition. Correct response should use past simple ('had') to match 'when you were a child'. Suggestion: answer directly using past tense and include subject and verb (e.g., 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.').

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. The appropriate response uses present simple ('I think') to express current opinion. Suggestion: respond with a complete sentence stating your opinion (e.g., 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.'), keeping subject-verb in present simple.