Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ nói vụn (filler). Bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sau đó cung cấp một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể (khi bắt đầu đạp, ai dạy bạn, kỷ niệm). Giữ tối đa 5 câu, dùng liên từ để mạch lạc (for example, because, so). Chú ý thì của động từ (quá khứ cho trải nghiệm trong quá khứ) và cấu trúc đúng (have/has/had).

例: Yes, I did. I had a bicycle when I was about seven, and my older brother taught me how to ride it. I used to cycle around our neighborhood every afternoon because it was a fun way to play and get some exercise.

提案: Cần trả lời mạch lạc, tránh nói lặp và filler. Bắt đầu với quan điểm rõ ràng, sau đó nêu 2 lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: sức khỏe, giao thông, môi trường) và nếu có thể cho ví dụ hoặc so sánh. Sử dụng liên từ (because, moreover, for instance) để nối ý. Tránh dùng những cụm từ sai ngữ pháp (e.g., "being overage").

例: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in Vietnam. More people cycle now because they care about their health and want to avoid traffic jams. Moreover, many cities are promoting cycling by building bike lanes, so it has become a practical and eco-friendly choice.

× I have a like everyone have a fight when they were kissed, right.

✓ I have, like, everyone has had a fight when they were kids, right.

The original sentence uses incorrect pronouns and verb forms. 'I have a like' is ungrammatical; likely the student meant 'I have, like' as a filler. 'Everyone have' is wrong because 'everyone' is singular and requires third person singular verb 'has'. 'Kissed' is incorrect contextually; the intended word is 'kids'. Suggestion: use 'everyone has had' for present perfect and 'kids' instead of 'kissed'.

× I used to ride a bike and I really enjoyed it.

✓ I used to ride a bike and I really enjoyed it.

This sentence is grammatically correct. 'Used to' correctly indicates a past habitual action and 'enjoyed' matches past tense. No change needed.

× Like I think riding a bike just like a ideal way to exercise and keep your body in fit and.

✓ I think riding a bike is just an ideal way to exercise and keep your body fit.

Errors include article misuse and word order. 'a ideal' should be 'an ideal' because 'ideal' begins with a vowel sound. The expression 'in fit' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'keep your body fit'. Also remove redundant 'like' and extra 'and' at the end. Suggestion: keep sentence concise: 'riding a bike is just an ideal way...'.

× Like people are more and more concerned about their health and of course that riding a bike is being overage and all the rage in Vietnam.

✓ People are becoming more and more concerned about their health, and of course riding a bike is very popular and all the rage in Vietnam.

Problems: awkward phrasing and incorrect verb forms. 'Are more and more concerned' is okay but 'becoming' is smoother. 'Of course that' is unnecessary; use a comma. 'Is being overage' is incorrect; 'being' with 'overage' (wrong word) is wrong. 'Overage' is incorrect word choice; use 'very popular' or 'all the rage'. Suggestion: say 'riding a bike is very popular' or 'is all the rage'.

× And I think they're not only right but by, but also, uh, another sport that is. MMM.

✓ And I think they're not only popular but also a great form of exercise compared to other sports.

Original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'They're not only right but by' is ungrammatical. Likely intent: 'I think they're not only popular but also...'. Replace with clear comparative phrase: 'not only popular but also a great form of exercise compared to other sports.' Suggestion: avoid filler words and complete the comparative structure 'not only... but also...'.