Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: You did not provide any answer. For this question, give a clear topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then add one or two brief supporting details (where you rode it, who taught you, or a memorable moment). Keep it natural, under five sentences, and use linking words to connect ideas (for example, “Yes, I did. When I was eight, my parents bought me a red bicycle, and I rode it to school every day. Because I practiced with my older brother, I learned to balance quickly, and I remember falling only once.”).

例: Yes, I did. When I was eight, my parents bought me a red bicycle and I rode it to school almost every day. Because my older brother taught me, I learned to balance quickly, and I remember being very proud the first time I rode without training wheels.

提案: The answer “English.” is not relevant. For this question, begin with a direct opinion (Yes or No), then support it with specific reasons or examples (urban commuting, fitness, traffic, or culture). Use linking words like “because,” “for example,” or “also” and keep it concise (one topic sentence + one supporting sentence). Use appropriate vocabulary related to transportation and popularity.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes in cities. For example, bike-sharing schemes and dedicated lanes have made cycling more convenient and safe, especially among students and office workers.

× English.

✓ Yes, I learned English, but I think you meant to ask about bikes. I had a bicycle when I was a child, and yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The student's single-word reply 'English.' does not answer the examiner's questions and lacks a verb or complete sentence, which is a sentence structure error (ID 26). The first question asked about having a bike in childhood (past tense), so the correct response should use past tense: 'I had a bicycle when I was a child.' The second question asks whether bikes are popular (present tense), so the answer should address the present: 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.' I combined these into a clear reply that uses appropriate tenses and complete sentences. Suggestion: answer each question directly with a subject and verb, match tense to the question (past for past experiences, present for current facts), and avoid single-word replies that do not address the question.