Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the answer more concise and natural, include a clear topic sentence and one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid repeating words (e.g., “bike” twice in short sentences).

例: Yes — I had a bike when I was a child. For example, I used to ride it every weekend with my parents to the park, which helped me learn balance and made family time more fun.

提案: Respond with a single clear sentence stating your opinion, then give a specific reason with a linking word. Fix sentence fragments and avoid redundancy.

例: No, I don’t think bicycles are very popular in Taiwan because most people prefer scooters for convenience and busy city streets, so I see scooters much more often than bicycles.

× 'I used to ride the bike on the weekend with my family.'

✓ 'I used to ride the bike on weekends with my family.'

'used to' expresses a past habitual action and should be followed by the base form of the verb (ride). The original sentence already used ride correctly, but 'on the weekend' is unnatural in this habitual context. Use the plural 'on weekends' to indicate a repeated action. Suggestion: say 'on weekends' for habitual activities.'},{

× 'No, I don't think bikes are popular. In my country, which is in Taiwan.'

✓ 'No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country, which is Taiwan.'

'In my country, which is in Taiwan.' is a sentence fragment because the relative clause is not attached to a main clause. Combine the ideas into one sentence and place the relative clause correctly: "in my country, which is Taiwan." This avoids the fragment and clarifies meaning.'},{