Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and avoid fillers. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct small pronunciation slips (e.g., "BA" → "bigger") and remove hesitations like "umm" and "uh."

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small pink bike with training wheels at first, and later I got a bigger pink bicycle that I used to ride around the neighborhood.

提案: Answer directly, then give specific reasons with clear linking words. Remove repetitions and grammar errors (e.g., "if there was" not "if they there there was", "people adapted to using bikes" not "adapt to bikes"). Use one or two clear supporting points about infrastructure or traffic.

例: Yes, bikes are fairly popular, but they could be more common if the infrastructure improved. For example, if there were dedicated bike lanes and safer intersections, more people would feel comfortable using bicycles for daily travel.

× I guess the traffic it's too chaotic to people adapt to bikes every day, to using bikes everyday.

✓ I guess the traffic is too chaotic for people to adapt to using bikes every day.

The original sentence has several issues: an unnecessary contraction 'it's' after 'traffic' and an incorrect infinitive/gerund structure. The pattern should be 'too + adjective + for + someone + to + verb' (here: 'too chaotic for people to adapt'). When expressing adapting to an activity, use the gerund 'using' after 'adapt to'. Also 'everyday' (adjective) is incorrect here; use the two-word adverbial phrase 'every day'. Suggestion: restructure to 'too chaotic for people to adapt to using bikes every day.' Note: This correction addresses the present participle/gerund issue (Grammar Problem Type ID 10) and related word choice errors that fall under the listed types.