Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn phát âm và lựa chọn từ sai làm người nghe không hiểu. Cần luyện phát âm các từ cơ bản (bike, child) và chú ý thứ tự từ trong câu. Ngoài ra, hãy tập trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề ngắn rồi bổ sung 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I learned to ride it in my neighborhood when I was six.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn là lặp lại câu hỏi bằng từ sai, cho thấy bạn cần cải thiện nghe hiểu và phát âm (bikes vs buy). Hãy tập hiểu câu hỏi trước khi trả lời, sau đó đưa ra ý kiến rõ ràng với lý do và ví dụ cụ thể, dùng liên từ để nối ý.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities where people use them to avoid traffic. For example, many commuters ride bicycles for short trips because they are cheap and convenient.

× Did you have a pie when you were a chew?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student used incorrect words: 'pie' instead of 'bike' and 'chew' instead of 'child'. This is a vocabulary/error and sentence structure issue making the sentence meaningless. Replace wrong words with correct nouns that fit the question context. Suggestion: listen carefully to the examiner and use 'bike' for a bicycle and 'child' for childhood; the auxiliary 'Did' with base verb 'have' is correct for past simple.

× Do you think buy or popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The student produced an ungrammatical sentence by mixing verb 'buy' and adjective 'popular' without correct structure. The question asks about opinion on popularity, so use: 'Do you think' + clause 'bikes are popular in your country?'. Ensure subject 'bikes' and verb 'are' complete the clause. Avoid inserting bare verbs like 'buy' without auxiliary or context; if asking about purchasing, use 'Do people buy bikes in your country?' instead.