Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Jawaban kurang jelas dan banyak kesalahan tata bahasa sehingga sulit dipahami. Fokus pada struktur sederhana: mulai dengan kalimat topik yang langsung menjawab pertanyaan, lalu tambahkan 1–2 kalimat pendukung yang spesifik (mis. siapa yang memberi sepeda, kapan, dan di mana Anda biasanya mengendarainya). Gunakan kalimat pendek, kata kerja yang tepat waktu (past tense), dan hindari pengulangan atau kata-kata tidak relevan.

例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. My parents bought it for my eighth birthday, and I rode it every afternoon around the neighborhood with my friends. I often practiced riding it in the park behind our house.

提案: Jawaban mengandung ide yang relevan tetapi tata bahasa dan susunan kalimat membuatnya kurang natural. Perbaiki dengan struktur: topik (pendapat singkat), alasan yang spesifik, dan contoh. Gunakan linking words sederhana seperti 'however' atau 'because' dan pastikan kata kerja dan kata benda benar (motorcycle, bicycle, exercise).

例: Yes, I do think bicycles are popular in my country, but it depends on the area. In my hometown people mostly use motorcycles for daily transport because they are faster. However, many people use bicycles for exercise or short trips around the neighborhood.

× Yes, of course baby and I'm a child to buy to a wise like like a wife and I running back up for my father in my soccer field.

✓ Yes, of course. When I was a child I had a bike that my parents bought for me, and I rode it in the field behind my father's house.

The original sentence has multiple issues: incorrect word choices (''baby'', ''buy to a wise like like a wife''), missing punctuation, and broken sentence structure. This falls under sentence structure errors (ID 26) and vocabulary misuse rather than a single grammatical rule. Suggestion: break ideas into clear clauses, use past tense consistently for childhood events ('had', 'bought', 'rode'), replace incorrect words with accurate ones ('parents' or 'my parents bought it for me', 'field behind my father's house'), and add punctuation to separate sentences.

× Yes I do, but in my hometown actually people in here usually to use motorcycle not bike and bike usually to use to jog.

✓ Yes, I do, but in my hometown people usually use motorcycles rather than bikes, and bikes are usually used for jogging.

Problems include unnecessary infinitive markers ('to use'), incorrect noun forms ('motorcycle' should be plural if general), awkward phrasing ('people in here'), and passive/active mismatch. This corresponds to incorrect use of verbs and prepositions (ID 11) and verb form errors (ID 8/26). Suggestion: remove 'to' before 'use', pluralize general nouns ('motorcycles'), use natural expressions ('people here' or 'in my hometown'), and use passive when describing general function ('are usually used for jogging').