Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and correct small grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g., saying "I didn't" twice) and correct word choice ("bike way" is incorrect).

例: No, I didn't have my own bike as a child. Instead, I often borrowed my father's bicycle when I wanted to ride, and I remember using it to go to a nearby park on weekends.

提案: Give a clear direct answer first, then provide two specific reasons with correct grammar and linking words. Fix subject-verb agreement and avoid vague phrases like "which is very convenient." Use examples or comparisons to support your point.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many people use them daily because they are inexpensive and can be faster than cars during rush hour, as in my father's case—he cycles to work to avoid traffic congestion.

× The only bike way I had belonged to my father, so I usually borrowed it when I wanted to ride.

✓ The only bicycle I had belonged to my father, so I usually borrowed it when I wanted to ride.

The original sentence contains an incorrect noun phrase 'bike way' which seems to be a word choice error rather than a verb -ing issue; however, based on the provided list we correct only allowed types. Replace 'bike way' with 'bicycle' for correct noun usage. Also, 'belonged' is correct as past tense showing possession in the past and 'usually borrowed' aligns with past habitual action. Suggestion: use 'bicycle' or 'bike' instead of 'bike way' to convey meaning clearly.

× Indeed, because I see a lot of people using it every day, which is very convenient and not so expensive.

✓ Indeed, because I see a lot of people using them every day; bikes are very convenient and not very expensive.

The pronoun 'it' incorrectly refers to plural 'bikes'; this is a pronoun-number mismatch corrected here and falls under present tense/pronoun agreement category. Also 'not so expensive' is colloquial; 'not very expensive' is more standard. Use 'them' or rephrase to 'bikes are' to match plural reference and maintain present simple tense for habitual actions.

× Just like my father, he always use it going to work and saves time from congested traffic.

✓ Just like my father, he always uses it to go to work and saves time in congested traffic.

The verb 'use' should be 'uses' to agree with the third person singular subject 'he' (third person singular issue). Also 'going to work' should be the infinitive 'to go to work' after 'uses it', and 'saves time from congested traffic' is unnatural; the standard phrasing is 'saves time in congested traffic'. Suggestions: ensure verb agrees with subject (add -s in present simple for he/she/it), use infinitive after verbs when indicating purpose, and use idiomatic preposition 'in' for 'in congested traffic'.