Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and ungrammatical. Give a direct topic sentence, correct tense, and one or two supporting details. Use linking words if adding details and avoid filler sounds. For example, clearly state whether you had a bike, when and why or why not.

例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I grew up in a small apartment and my parents thought the roads were unsafe for young children, so they preferred I walk or use public transport. However, I remember borrowing bikes from friends sometimes during summer, which was fun.

提案: Your answer shows agreement but is vague and repetitive. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific reasons or examples. Use linking words (for example, because, therefore) and avoid repetition and hesitations.

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many people in rural areas rely on bicycles for daily transport because they are affordable and convenient. In cities, cycling is increasing due to traffic congestion and bike-sharing schemes.

× Honestly speaking, I haven't uh, bike my child, uh, period.

✓ Honestly speaking, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

Grammar problem type ID: 6 and 26. The student used 'haven't' (present perfect) incorrectly for a past time reference ('when I was a child') and the word order is incorrect ('bike my child'). Use simple past 'didn't have' for a finished time in the past. Also remove filler sounds and add the article 'a' before 'bike'. Suggestion: Use 'I didn't have a bike when I was a child.'

× Absolutely yes. My country is uh, using my bike, uh. Uh, some villages are using uh, everyday bike bike meaning now.

✓ Absolutely. Bicycles are very popular in my country. In some villages, people use bikes every day.

Grammar problem type IDs: 6, 1 and 26. The original has incorrect tense and unnatural continuous form ('is using my bike'), wrong possession ('my bike' is incorrect in this context), pluralization issues ('bike bike'), and awkward word order. The correct general statement uses simple present 'are popular' for habitual truth and plural 'bicycles'. For the second sentence use 'people use bikes every day' to express habitual action in some villages. Suggestion: Say 'Bicycles are very popular in my country. In some villages, people use bikes every day.'