Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ естественный, но содержит грамматические ошибки и некоторые повторения. Улучшите грамматику (времена, согласование), избегайте разговорных сокращений и лишних слов, добавьте связку и одну–две дополнительные конкретные детали. Например: используйте Past Simple и правильную форму глагола (taught), замените 'wanna' на 'want to', сократите повторы 'on a bike'.

例: Yes, I did. My father taught me how to ride when I was about seven, and I remember feeling very proud when I could cycle without help. It was a lot of fun, and I still thank him for giving me that confidence.

提案: Ответ понятен, но неестественен и содержит ошибки словоупотребления и структуры. Уточните идею в начале (Yes/No), используйте корректные выражения (e.g. 'popular as a mode of transport'), объясните причину более конкретно и завершите мысль. Используйте связки (however, because, nowadays) и избегайте тавтологии ('comfortable comfortability').

例: No, I don't think so. While bicycles were a common mode of transport a few decades ago, nowadays most people prefer cars because they are more comfortable and faster, especially for long distances and family trips.

× Yeah, I had a bike and I remember that my father teach me how to ride on a bike and it was really fun and I really wanna thank him for this.

✓ Yeah, I had a bike and I remember that my father taught me how to ride a bike, and it was really fun, so I really want to thank him for that.

The verb 'teach' should be in the past tense 'taught' to match the past context ('I had', 'I remember'). 'Wanna' is informal and should be 'want to' in standard English. 'Ride on a bike' is non-idiomatic; native speakers say 'ride a bike'. Use 'so' or a comma to link the clauses and 'for that' instead of 'for this' to refer back to a past event. Suggestion: use consistent past tense for past events, avoid colloquial contractions in formal speech, and use natural verb-preposition collocations.

× To be honest, I think definitely no because several years ago it was really popular transport, but now I think that cars are most used in my country for its comfortable comfortability and.

✓ To be honest, I definitely don't think so because several years ago bicycles were a popular form of transport, but now I think that cars are used most in my country because they are more comfortable.

The response 'I think definitely no' is ungrammatical; use 'I definitely don't think so'. 'It was really popular transport' incorrectly uses 'it' and lacks plural/appropriate noun form — 'bicycles were a popular form of transport' or 'cycling was popular'. 'Cars are most used' is awkward; 'cars are used most' or 'cars are the most used' is better. 'For its comfortable comfortability' is redundant and incorrect; use 'because they are more comfortable'. Suggestions: form negative opinions with proper auxiliary verbs, match noun number and referents, avoid redundancy, and choose clearer comparative structures.