Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response repeats the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a direct, concise answer (1–2 sentences) with a short supporting detail. Use a topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then add a specific detail such as when you got it or how you used it, connected with a linking word (e.g., "because", "so", "when").

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it for my seventh birthday, and I used to ride it to the park every weekend because it helped me feel independent.

提案: Again, you repeated the question instead of answering. Provide a clear opinion in a topic sentence, then support it with a specific reason or example using a linking word (e.g., "because", "for example", "however"). Keep it natural and no more than 3–4 sentences.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, cities have dedicated bike lanes and lots of students ride bikes to school, which makes cycling a common choice.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The original student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering; this is a sentence structure/use error (type 26). To answer a past-tense yes/no question, use past simple: 'had'. Provide a complete sentence with subject and verb. Suggestion: respond with 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.' or 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.'

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The student again repeated the examiner's question rather than producing an answer, which is a sentence structure/use error (type 26). The question is present-tense; a natural answer uses present simple: 'I think bikes are popular in my country.' If disagreeing, say 'No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country.' Keep subject + verb and correct tense.